Wikipedia:Peer review/Rwandan genocide/archive1
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It's been a while since this article's last Good Article Nomination, and it has expanded considerably since then. I don't see any obvious issues at first glance, other than the History.com ref, but maybe someone else can shed some more light on this.
I consider peer review of this article important, since Encyclopedia Britannica still hasn't covered possibly the worst post-Cold War mass genocide, happening in 1994 with 500K-1M dead (though to be fair, they were busy going broke competing with Microsoft Encarta).⸺(Random)staplers 22:51, 17 August 2024 (UTC)
- Some drive by comments, not a deep dive by any means
- - In the Preparation for genocide section there are several one or two sentence paragraphs and one massive paragraph. The way this is structured feels unfortunate to me and the information presentation would be improved by altering this
- - sexual violence, again why the one sentence paragraph, not cohesive
- - Killing of the Twa, one paragraph level-one heading - should either be expanded to show its significance for that level of heading or folded into another section if it's not
- - Rwandan Patriotic Front's military campaign and victory, again why the one sentence paragraph, not cohesive
- -France and Opération Turquoise, again why the one sentence paragraph, not cohesive
- - "HBO Films released the made-for-television historical drama film titled Sometimes in April in 2005." unsourced
- - "Pierre Rutare, the Tutsi father of Belgian-Rwandan singer Stromae, was killed in the 1994 Rwandan Genocide." unsourced
- - Commemoration, another level-one one paragraph heading. this feels like it can be significantly expanded
- - Maps of Rwanda any particular reason why this is here
- citations:
- The citation formatting is generally inconsistent. Some news sources are rendered as long cites and some are in bibliography and given shortened cites. Pick one or the other for news/non-paginated sources. formatting should be more consistent also
- - many sources need to be properly formatted for consistency
- - need page on kirschke citation
- - there has to be a better source than the unlinked Akayesu trial document
- - citation from Genin, Aaron should be sentence or title case not all caps
- - citation from huffpost should be replaced, there has to be a better source for this given the scholarship available on this topic
- - replace history.com source, unreliable
- - the order of genocide is repeated as full cite, move to bibliography and do shortened footnotes for consistency PARAKANYAA (talk) 00:39, 18 September 2024 (UTC)