Naia Pard
Author of Heartfelt
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Heartfelt by Naia Pard
This review was written for LibraryThing Early Reviewers.The plot and characters were great. I liked the created world and the pacing was good. My one issue was, the words used at times were just strange. Like someone translated it from another language. One sentence as an example "like a dog swimming in murky waters, blinding lapping towards the shore" . blinding lapping?? PLEASE author get someone who edit books to go over this. Its a good book, it could be so much better if these errors (that occur every 2nd page) get fixed.
This review was written for LibraryThing Early Reviewers.This books had a very interesting magic system/world build. The characters were unique but still felt real. I will admit that the beginning was a bit confusing and I felt as if I was missing something but it all got later explained. Great book and I definitely recommend it for anyone on their vampire era!
This review was written for LibraryThing Early Reviewers.Overall I was not a fan of the book. Needed more editing definitely. The use of the word chemise kept throwing me.
It seemed to be in a fantasy world, with everyone using mobile and wearing sneakers... but then also chemises? Likely the aim, but often it was hard to tell if the imagry was symbolic or taking place.
The twist in the last chapters was quite good, though I had guessed her type of vampire
Didn't realise there was a glossary at the back until half way through, that would have been better if I realised. My fault
Overall not terrible, but not for me… (more)
It seemed to be in a fantasy world, with everyone using mobile and wearing sneakers... but then also chemises? Likely the aim, but often it was hard to tell if the imagry was symbolic or taking place.
The twist in the last chapters was quite good, though I had guessed her type of vampire
Didn't realise there was a glossary at the back until half way through, that would have been better if I realised. My fault
Overall not terrible, but not for me… (more)
This review was written for LibraryThing Early Reviewers.I enjoyed this story. It is one of my top 20 books of the year.
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